Week 3 story: Odysseus and the cyclops
The cyclops eating Odysseus's men
Odysseus and his crew had been out at sea for days now. They
were beginning to run low on supplies and needed to find a place to restock
soon. They were in great luck to happen upon an island. They promptly set sail
in the direction of the island and arrived in no time at all. Upon reaching the
island, it was clear how prosperous this land was, and how it would be the
perfect place to rest and refill their supplies.
Odysseus and roughly half of his crew set out to explore
this lushes island. It was not long when they realized that this island was inhabited.
They spied a giant cyclops, but more importantly they laid their eyes upon the
bountiful amount of livestock and sheep that he had. Cyclops are not known for their hospitality;
in fact, they are known to smite any who come to close to their land. Knowing
this did not detour Odysseus and his men in the slightest. In fact, they were invigorated
by the amount of resources there were to be gained. There appeared to be enough
to sail all the way back home, tenfold in fact.
Odysseus and his crew watched the cyclops carefully
throughout the day, slowly devising when the best chance to steal his livestock
and food reserves would be. They decide dawn would be the best time to sneak
into the cyclops’ cave, just after he lets his herds out to feed. Once inside
his cave, they were astounded by how much food there was, just laying around,
and it was all theirs for the taking.
Odysseus and his men gathered as much food and livestock as
quickly as they could, so as not to be caught by the cyclops. They had rounded
up just about all they could when the cyclops came sauntering into the cave. He
was immediately taken aback by all of these little men who had snuck inside of
his home. He demanded to know what business they had. Odysseus was quick to
pipe up. He told the cyclops that they were on a long journey and were just
seeking some shelter from the elements and a small morsel in order to stave off
starvation. The cyclops appeared to respond well to this. He said to Odysseus, “oh,
I took you to be lowly thieves, let me extend to you my home and my food. Let
me roll this boulder into place so none of you will have to suffer from the
light of day”. The cyclops, without effort, rolled the boulder into place as he
continued talking to Odysseus and his crew. “And please, eat your fill, but I
hope you will not mind if I do the same”. The cyclops shot out his arms and
snatched up the two men closest to him and bit off both of their heads in one
fell swoop. Odysseus could not believe his eyes, two of his men died, and there
was not a thing he could have done about it. This creature before them possessed
unmatched power, speed, and size. They are now no more than a meal to this
creature. The cyclops grins with pieces of flesh strung throughout his teeth.
He says to Odysseus “do you realize now, the hopeless situation that you have led
your men into? You are nothing more than an inconsequential snack for a cyclops”.
With that, the cyclops laid down on the floor and feel immediately asleep. This
action just further showed this difference in power, and how the cyclops knew
that they could pose no threat to him.
Odysseus was filled with rage, and was not one to give up,
no matter how dire the situation may seem to be. He urged his men to draw their
weapons and strike down this beast as he lays. Their chances would only dwindle
as the more of them would be eaten. Now was their chance, there best and maybe
only chance to avenge their fallen comrades. The men had no quarrels with this,
they were just as much up in arms about the loss of their two crew mates. There
was nothing that they were able to do then, but they can at least vanquish the
foe so their friends’ spirits can rest in peace. All of the men took their
position and readied their weapons. They took careful aim to hit the most vital
of spots on the cyclops’ body. On Odysseus’ signal, they plunged their weapons
deep into the cyclops. With this, Odysseus shouted to the cyclops “You thought
yourself invincible, and now you die because you chose to underestimate us”.
The cyclops smiled and spoke softly with his last breath “my death is not due
to underestimating you, but rather overestimating you. Do you realize yet, the
hopeless situation that you have led your men into?” These were not the final
words Odysseus had anticipated hearing. It appeared as though they had won the battle,
their foe vanquished, yet there was still unease all throughout the air.
The cyclops was dead, they had won their battle. Odysseus
and his men were free to gather up all the supplies they could hope to carry
and leave. Odysseus went to move the boulder out of the cave’s entrance, but it
felt as though he were trying to move a mountain. Panic quickly set in, and he
urgently called to help him move this boulder so they could leave, but it was
no use. They did not even possess a fraction of the strength needed to move
this boulder. It is at this moment when Odysseus finally realized the hopeless
situation that he had led his men into.
Story source: Homer's Odyssey, translated into English by Tony Kline. (2004).
Authors Note: This story is derived from the odyssey. Odysseus
and his men sneak into the cyclopes cave and get caught. Odysseus tries to
reason with the cyclops to no avail. The cyclops traps them in the cave and
eats a few of the men. Odysseus devises a brilliant plan, to stab the cyclops
in the eye while he is sleeping. This blinds the cyclops, so he is unable to see,
but is still alive so he can move the boulder out of the way. They are able to
escape because of this very well calculated plan. I wanted to tell the story of
what might happen if the plan wasn’t formulated as perfectly as it was, for I
feel like it would be easy to overlook the fact that the cyclops is needed
alive to move the boulder.
Hey Charley!
ReplyDeleteWhen Odysseus and his men saw that there was a cyclops inhabiting the island, it made me curious as to what was going to happen next. Since cyclops are dangerous, were they going to turn back and leave the island? It actually surprised me that he had appeared so hospitable at first, and then again when he ate the mens' heads off!
I wonder why the cyclops would fall asleep while the men still had their weapons. It would seem logical, either afraid or not, you would want to keep an eye on your enemy... ESPECIALLY if they had weapons. I am also not sure how the cyclops would overestimate them. Is it because he believed that Odysseus would realize the hopeless situation that he had led his men into?
The story is kind of clumped together, and sometimes I lost my place while reading. I can see where you may have hit "enter" once to move down a line, but what if you hit "enter" an extra time giving the different paragraphs that extra space? It might help with the flow, and prevent the reader from losing their place.
Hi Charley!
ReplyDeleteI also read this story, and I really like the alternate ending. I thought it was chilling how the cyclops' last words were something he had already said to Odysseus, foreshadowing that they had just doomed themselves further. I also like how the story ends with these same words. Awesome cliffhanger!
It was understandable that Odysseus and his men were a little too greedy to not be focused on the resources, but I was surprised that someone didn't show at least a little concern for the danger of this task. Maybe you can add in a character who is like "the voice of reason" and tries to sway them against the plan.
If you wanted you could also create one or two more different characters among Odysseus' men? Maybe one of them could be a person who is eaten, or the first to want to take action against the cyclops?