week 13 story: Little Cub
Polar bear on ice
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Little
Cub
There was a northern tribe in which
resided a man and his wife. The woman was carrying the man’s child and they
could not have been happier, for all was right in the world. The night of the
birth there were some complications. A little girl came into this world without
a mother and the man gained a daughter at the cost of his wife. The man held
his daughter within his arms and cried, tears of sorrow and tears of joy, but
bitter all the same. It had always been his and his wife’s dream to have a
child and raise that child, that little cub of theirs. The man was scared, but
knew it was up to him to see this dream of theirs through.
The man had no clue on how to raise
a daughter. He knew how to hunt and provide, but he was useless when it came to
cleaning the animals and cooking them into a nutritious meal. He had his sister
help him with everything that he could not do, but it was still his daughter,
his little cub, and he tried his best to teach her everything that he could. He
taught her how to start a fire and taught her as best he could to cook, but the
food was never good. He taught her how to shoot a bow and the basics of hunting.
He taught her how to track animals and how to stay down wind, so they don’t
catch scent of you. He taught her all of these skills because those are the things
that he knew how to do. He was surprised when she wanted to join them on the
hunt, for he was only teaching her these skills so they could spend time with
one another. He told her that venturing far outside of the campgrounds on a
hunt can be very dangerous and she was not to do it. He knew death on these
hunts was not uncommon and he could not bear to lose his daughter, his little
cub.
It was the midst of winter and food
reserves were running low. The man and a group of his fellow tribesmen set out
to find food. The weather was harsh and the snow unrelenting. It had been days
and there was no sign of the group of hunters returning. The daughter waited
impatiently day after day, hoping to see their return. After what felt like an
eternity, the hunting part returned. Overtaken by joy, the daughter sprinted
through the heavy snow to go and meet them. She happily greeted them, but not a
one responded, not a one returned eye contact with her, not a one could bear to
look at her. She slowly caught on to this and frantically looked around hurriedly
for her dad. She finally caught sight of her uncle, tears rolling down his
face, and she knew. He embraced her and they both just cried.
The next day, the uncle told her
what had happened. He explained to her how they were attacked by a giant polar
bear. They were able to kill it, but not without loss… The uncle told her how
this bear had a cub and they were able to capture it. He showed the cub to the
girl and said that she could take her aggression out on it. The girl was quick
to refuse, for she had a gentle spirit. With tears rolling down her face, still
distraught about her father, she asked her uncle if she could keep the bear cub.
With a smile on his face, he told her sure and that cub was all hers. He had
hoped that this bear would help keep her mind off of things.
This small bear cub of hers was the
only thing that gave the little girl any sort of joy anymore. She was her
father’s little cub, and now she has a little cub of her own. It did not make
the pain go away, but it made it a little more bearable. She loved this little
cub of hers like it was family and brought it with her everywhere she went. She
would ask for an extra bowl of stew so she could feed it to the bear. Her aunt
was even kind enough to make clothes for the bear, so the little girl and her
cub could have matching outfits. The pain was still there, but just like her
uncle had hoped, the bear had done an excellent job at keeping her mind off of things.
All throughout her adolescence she
had her little cub with her. This little cub of hers was her only friend, for
nobody wanted to associate with the bear girl. They would all make fun of her
and she would always threaten them with her bear, but they always just laughed
at these threats, never taking her seriously. She was content with her only
friend being her little cub, but she would not mind having a human friend,
maybe just one person who understood her.
One day, the girl was approached by
one of the few boys that had never made fun of her. He asked her about her bear
and why she was so attached to it. She was hesitant, but eventually told him
the story of her dad and how she got her little cub. The boy asked if she knew
that the bear was not real. She sighed and with a tear in her eye she replied
yes, but reality is sad. He extended his hand to her and told her that it does
not have to be. Fighting back tears, she grabbed his hand and acknowledged that
she was probably too old to be playing with toys. She admitted that she needs
to stop holding onto the past and that it is time to move forward. Unable to hold
back the tears back anymore she cried, both tears of sorrow and tears of joy,
but they were bitter all the same.
Authors note: This story was inspired by the story The Woman Who Had a Bear as a
Foster-Son. The original story was about a lonely old lady
who was given an actual bear cub. The cub got bigger and bigger, until it began
to go out hunting with the tribe. The old lady eventually had to get rid of the
bear because it killed a man who attacked it. She got rid of him because she
knew that others would come for her bear and that he would be a sitting duck if
he stayed with her. Her getting rid of her bear made me think of a child having
to give up their toys. Because of this thought, I decided to make the old lady
a child and the bear a simple stuffed animal. I still wanted the bear to seem
real though, for that is how we see them when we are young. I knew that this
was the general ending I was going for, so I decided to try my hand at writing
a sad story that would accent the ending well. I made it so she was a lonely
little girl, with nothing in the world except for her bear. I think that aspect
of the story paralleled the original well, but I completely deviated beyond
that.
Story source: Eskimo Folk-Tales by Knud Rasmussen with illustrations by native Eskimo artists (1921).
Hi Charley!
ReplyDeleteThe story starts introducing the characters on the somber note of the wife's death. It was especially so heartbreaking when you described how the husband's dreams were all lost, as he was faced with the daunting task of raising the little girl alone. You did an amazing job describing and cultivating the wholesome father-daughter bond as they learn to navigate the world without the mother.
Side note: I love your name!
Hi Charley!
ReplyDeleteWow, I love this adaptation of the original story. I also read the source story for this, so I was able to follow along and see all the changes you'd made, which was really awesome. My only editing suggestion would be to make it more clear at the end that the bear was a teddy bear, and not just an imaginary friend, and perhaps let us know whether the whole story about the dad fighting a polar bear was true as well, or if it was an imagined story on her part to cope with the loss of her father.
Hey Charley!
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your story! It was super easy to follow and very fun to read. I think you added some more detail into it about how the bear was actually a teddy bear then your point would come across better at the end. As a whole, I thought it was really fun and cute. I also think you supplied a good amount of background information in your author's note. You have a slight typo at the top of your page. I think you meant to say "This story can now be VIEWED in my storybook here." No worries I literally do that exact same thing in my writing all the time.